Feedback is appreciated, and i'm not sure which label this one suits.
This post has been edited by Strigoi: 03 February 2012 - 07:03 AM
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Trance Track. My latest.
#1
Posted 03 February 2012 - 06:59 AM
Okay guys here's my latest trance tune...
Feedback is appreciated, and i'm not sure which label this one suits.
Feedback is appreciated, and i'm not sure which label this one suits.
#2
Posted 04 February 2012 - 02:23 PM
Sorry but this isn't ready for any label yet. The mix needs work, and quite a bit of it, the whole thing feels quite loose and lacks compression and tightness.
The mix in general is far too heavy and low, which feels like it trudges along lethargicly. I'm not keen on the pads you've used - sounds like a basic nexus preset to me and not a very pleasing one.
The bass line is pretty boring and the personally I don't like that kick at all.
I'm not quite sure why you have the piano come in immediately at the start of the breakdown, with the chord stabs and the pads still swirling about - far too much going on, things sound awkward and out of place.
For now I'd practice and enjoy, don't bother being a noob and talking about labels because it's pretty insulting to the rest of us who made this kind of stuff a long time ago (and are yet to be anywhere near label releases)...
You need time, time to practice mixing, making melodies/ chord progressions and decent sounds.
Sorry to sound harsh but at least I'm not "leading you on" like all of your SC followers seem to be doing!
Without a reality check you'll never benefit from feedback
The mix in general is far too heavy and low, which feels like it trudges along lethargicly. I'm not keen on the pads you've used - sounds like a basic nexus preset to me and not a very pleasing one.
The bass line is pretty boring and the personally I don't like that kick at all.
I'm not quite sure why you have the piano come in immediately at the start of the breakdown, with the chord stabs and the pads still swirling about - far too much going on, things sound awkward and out of place.
For now I'd practice and enjoy, don't bother being a noob and talking about labels because it's pretty insulting to the rest of us who made this kind of stuff a long time ago (and are yet to be anywhere near label releases)...
You need time, time to practice mixing, making melodies/ chord progressions and decent sounds.
Sorry to sound harsh but at least I'm not "leading you on" like all of your SC followers seem to be doing!
Without a reality check you'll never benefit from feedback
#3
Posted 05 February 2012 - 02:51 AM
not a bad start, some good ideas and it's definitely a starting point. needs a stronger melodic hook in the intro, and it would be helpful to hear the whole tune to comment on the arrangement.
overall though this isn't signable.
overall though this isn't signable.
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