[EmilGallier]

Hey guys, totally new to this forum but ill definetly stick around here for the time beeing!
Anyhow, here is a track I just finished and I would like some feedback from you guys.


(Updated track)


Hope you enjoy it.

-Emil Gallier

This post has been edited by EmilGallier: 11 September 2010 - 01:45 PM

[silencegroove]

very 7thy, it's an icon of anjunabeats today nice flow and pretty clean mix!

[EmilGallier]

silencegroove, on 08 September 2010 - 05:28 PM, said:

very 7thy, it's an icon of anjunabeats today nice flow and pretty clean mix!

Thanks alot

[DarzhLiebek]

Nice work, could imagine this on a James Grant Anjunabeats Worldwide.

All sounds pretty sweet, my only critisism would be that nothing new really happens in the second breakdown, i'd like to be taken somewhere extra.

The plucky synth, although nice, is maybe too weak on its own.

Some washy chords added underneath could work, or a second sound layered with the pluck - i can hear something like the BT - Flaming June pluck in my head... adding that kind of tonality singing with the pluck would take it to the next level in my opinion

Definitely some nice Anjunadeep material here!

[EmilGallier]

DarzhLiebek, on 08 September 2010 - 06:57 PM, said:

Nice work, could imagine this on a James Grant Anjunabeats Worldwide.

All sounds pretty sweet, my only critisism would be that nothing new really happens in the second breakdown, i'd like to be taken somewhere extra.

The plucky synth, although nice, is maybe too weak on its own.

Some washy chords added underneath could work, or a second sound layered with the pluck - i can hear something like the BT - Flaming June pluck in my head... adding that kind of tonality singing with the pluck would take it to the next level in my opinion

Definitely some nice Anjunadeep material here!

Thank you for your feedback! Yeah I see what you mean, A Flaming June pluck-ish sound would probably work well!
Will deifinetly look in to it Thanks again!

[bubbletoe]

Great percs from the off and clear and loud (yay I like loud - where it still is clear and not over zizzled like here.

Nice fades and joins.

Like that little square wave arp in the first break - compliments the main synth well.

Second break needs to travel somewhere new imo.

The sub and low bass for me could use some entrapment to keep the level nice n smooth.

A pleasant track mate.

[Jady Synthman]

WOW rlly nice one very relaxing and pleasant to my ears

[EmilGallier]

bubbletoe, on 09 September 2010 - 01:46 PM, said:

Great percs from the off and clear and loud (yay I like loud - where it still is clear and not over zizzled like here.

Nice fades and joins.

Like that little square wave arp in the first break - compliments the main synth well.

Second break needs to travel somewhere new imo.

The sub and low bass for me could use some entrapment to keep the level nice n smooth.

A pleasant track mate.

Thanks for that mate I can clearly hear that the second break needs something more, will work on that asap.
Ill post the new version here again later on and I would much appreciate if you could have a second look Thanks!

[maxvenus]

nice cool track here, loving that bouncy bassline!

Percussion is simple yet it flows perfectly, could use maybe a tiny lead a nicely constucted square/saw or somthing im not sure. Still its not essential thats just my style

good stuff

[mathieutilli]

Lovely m8 ! The only thing I would say is maybe add a higher bassline on top of the one you have or make the one you have have a bit more harmonics. Again, tune is very nice !

[EmilGallier]

Thanks for the kind respons guys! Ive listened to what you thought and made some changes, put some more stuff in the second break, so tell me what you think this time.



Thanks a lot!